http://disqus.com/people/1ca498982a4a1a812dcfc29c561eda73/enSat, 21 Mar 2009 19:40:19 -0000http://nasirjumani.disqus.com/morph_nokia8217s_revolutionary_concept_phone/#comment-1593787If the person who wrote this entry is not a native English speaker, then please read no further. It is not my point to criticize anyone who has English as a second language. <br><br>To accept the writing from someone for whom English is a primary language, however, raises the question of credibility of the information and the informer.<br><br>This entry contains so many poorly structured sentences that lead to ambiguity of meaning, so many "small" mistakes, such a lack of proper capitalization, missing or redundant punctuation, word misuse and run-on sentences that lose connection with their initial point, that the reader wonders if the writer truly understands the subject or is simply parroting set phrases.<br><br>My impression is that the writer is not adequately educated in English and therefore not qualified to represent such a prestigious client as Nokia, especially in the introduction of new and exciting technology, where clarity and quality of language is essential to attracting customers.<br><br>Writing conveys more than information about a product; it also characterizes the writer. How he writes reflects well or poorly on himself and by association, his client.Joseph HarrisMon, 25 Feb 2008 19:25:51 -0000http://frigginrandom.disqus.com/sideways_totally_wicked_photography/#comment-7417277Now, now, children, don't fight. Say "sorry" to the nice man.Joseph HarrisSat, 21 Mar 2009 19:40:19 -0000