http://disqus.com/by/heatherann/enMon, 14 Sep 2009 08:49:37 -0000http://gimmetruth.tumblr.com/post/187474780#comment-16574994<p>Now now, Carl. :)</p>heatherannMon, 14 Sep 2009 08:49:37 -0000http://gimmetruth.tumblr.com/post/181750858#comment-16097379<p>I really, REALLY like these two book jackets. :)</p>heatherannMon, 07 Sep 2009 11:41:41 -0000http://gimmetruth.tumblr.com/post/167849194#comment-15190316<p>Hmm... it looks like you're headed in the right direction, but this took me a minute to figure out. My eye was drawn towards the right, so I couldn't see what the illustration was of, and it took a minute to realise it was facing left, and I should be trying to see the head on the left, not the body on the right. If you cover the head, it's very difficult to discern what you're looking at, and I guess my focus essentially did that.</p><p>Maybe if you flipped it, or softened the lines on the body? The neck lines are so prominent, and draw my eyes to the right and down, towards the text and away from the dog's head, so I barely even glanced at that part of the logo at first.</p><p>P.S. HI CARL!! :)</p>heatherannFri, 21 Aug 2009 09:23:39 -0000