http://disqus.com/by/camphor/enWed, 19 Sep 2012 15:26:52 -0000http://wistfullylinda.blogspot.com/2012/09/part-3-green-eyed-asian-love-interest.html#comment-655851086<p>Having read it, my only comment is this:<br>I see no evidence for this author being anything but lazy: not just in the research, but also in this obvious easy out to explain why a girl would find someone attractive.<br>Not deliberately stupid, but perhaps thoughtless, maybe simply uncaring. I would call this detail, enjoy the rest of the story and never buy another of this series, because I find it personally offensive to see a minority group treated carelessly, or what I like to call lazy writing.</p><p>And yes, green eyes is lazy. You could do chocolate, coffee, tea, obsidian, opal and burnished metals (I've seen all these) - but those require slightly more skill to sell - and it appears all his skills are used up on the story. But the truly transcendental stories care about the details too, and - these kinds of details I care about.</p>camphorWed, 19 Sep 2012 15:26:52 -0000http://gapp.in/2009/03/founder-of-an-opposing-faction/#comment-6837024<p>Green/Blue/Pleasant anything.<br>I'm usually a Small.<br>Female T.</p><p>And yes, I'll use it the minute I figure out how to pronounce it.</p><p>Yikes. How does this comment system work??</p>camphorTue, 03 Mar 2009 08:34:45 -0000