http://disqus.com/by/ElaineGarrett/enSat, 07 Mar 2009 21:45:17 -0000http://www.toddtalks.com/2009/01/02/time-for-a-coffee-break/#comment-6985864<p>ACK! I missed the first comment successfully posting. Guess it IS too close to bedtime for me to be posting!</p>ElaineGarrettSat, 07 Mar 2009 21:45:17 -0000http://www.toddtalks.com/2009/01/02/time-for-a-coffee-break/#comment-6985823<p>Excellent affiliate content, Todd! This is one of the best articles I've seen. Makes me want to brew a fresh cup of coffee, but, alas, it's too close to bed time!</p>ElaineGarrettSat, 07 Mar 2009 21:43:18 -0000http://bensettle.com/blog/first-mob-sales-letter-critique/#comment-4827427<p>I had three problems with this landing page.</p><p>1. I thought the spinning test was interesting, but I wanted to know what medical authority recognizes this as a reliable test of endocrine system performance.</p><p>2. The photo did not relate to the topic; only a before and after photograph would be relevant--and not just a head shot.</p><p>3. The headline promises losing weight in 15 seconds a day, but the topics highlighted in the book covered activities and additional purchases like supplements that clearly indicate more than 15 seconds and the purchase price of the book are involved.</p>ElaineGarrettSat, 06 Dec 2008 11:19:58 -0000